in dali's country

riderka · 07-01-2008, 05:32 PM

Hi, I wrote this poem or song some time ago, just decided to post it here..
I would really appreciate any comments whether it's good or bad, or whether you like it or not. Thank you.

They showed us three Moons
Coming together into one
Turning the sky so strange
Purple, pink and blue

Colours everywhere
We stopped and watched
Three Moons coming together
the sky was so different that day

the picture of the sky changed
see the three eyes on a face without a mouth
a spaceship above our heads
someone disembarks the ship

we were standing down
hear the strange voice?
See the strange face?
And we realized

we were in a country of Dali
but didn't know the bloody thing
they just put the honey on tounge
and catch us in cage

yeah, they chose the best place
in front of the supermarket cathedral
what is a saint place
in this new age…

colours were everywhere
colours were everywhere
but it was just an ilusion
to make us been theirs

Angela Harlem · 07-29-2008, 07:11 PM

Words aren't my thing usually, but this was great because it got me imagining and so on. Great stuff!

officeman120 · 08-01-2008, 12:02 AM

Quite nice man, it take me through that ilusion.

07-01-2008, 05:32 PM	#1
riderka Acrobat Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Slovakia Posts: 498 Local Time: 12:30 AM	in dali's country Hi, I wrote this poem or song some time ago, just decided to post it here.. I would really appreciate any comments whether it's good or bad, or whether you like it or not. Thank you. They showed us three Moons Coming together into one Turning the sky so strange Purple, pink and blue Colours everywhere We stopped and watched Three Moons coming together the sky was so different that day the picture of the sky changed see the three eyes on a face without a mouth a spaceship above our heads someone disembarks the ship we were standing down hear the strange voice? See the strange face? And we realized we were in a country of Dali but didn't know the bloody thing they just put the honey on tounge and catch us in cage yeah, they chose the best place in front of the supermarket cathedral what is a saint place in this new age… colours were everywhere colours were everywhere but it was just an ilusion to make us been theirs

07-29-2008, 07:11 PM	#2
Angela Harlem Jesus Online Premium Member Join Date: Dec 1969 Location: BRINDLE UNDIES WITH DOLPHIN NUKES TESTING SONAR IN BONO'S HOBO BOX ON GEORGE STREET Posts: 25,844 Local Time: 09:30 AM	Words aren't my thing usually, but this was great because it got me imagining and so on. Great stuff! __________________

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08-01-2008, 12:02 AM	#3
officeman120 The Fly Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 38 Local Time: 10:30 PM	Quite nice man, it take me through that ilusion.