First Time Here....Be Nice

[beegee]

this line "wake up...before you don't matter"

all day, this thought stayed with me. it speaks to me in so many ways.

[Achtung_Bebe]

hey i'm glad to see you're still writing... nice, deepy, heavy stuff(but that's to be expected). Just one thing though--this is hardly your first time here, the subject line LIES

p.s. did you ever get my email from my new account i wonder... i'd write you again and fill you in on stuff but I'm not confident that you'd get it

**sorry to use your thread for something other than praise

[EdgeVox]

BEBE!!! no I never got your email.......where have you been I called and left a completely bogus name like Engelbert or something......your sister was not amused....

[EdgeVox]

Haven't had a good girl in a while
Mostly empty dresses in prominent smiles
I miss your laugh
Your circumstancial eyes
When did you decide to leave me dry
Was it when I was too in love to notice
You knew I'd be stubborn
You knew I'd be too wrapped up in you to care
Keys in your pocket all along
I love you for leaving me behind
Makes me want you even more
The dirt kicked up by your departure
Makes me mourn my naivette
You knew I'd never change
Thought you'd flinch before me
Can't really claim victory when it's all the same
I chose you over God
Don't regret it
Don't repent
You're the best thing that's ever hurt me
Sadistic spirit
Uneventful love
Saw it coming
Turned away
Will you take my hand when it all burns down
Will you help me burn it all down
I'd tear it all down for you
I'd tear myself down for you
Your kerosene love
Your eyes of flame
Love, I can't let you go

[beegee]

you can attribute this honest review to my lousy mood...

i think you can do better than this.

[EdgeVox]

Originally posted by bonosgirl84 you can attribute this honest review to my lousy mood... i think you can do better than this.

bonosgirl84,
I appreciate the honesty, I prefer it......I wrote that after I got home from the bars....not sure what I think of it.....I think the ending came out pretty cool.....why are you in a lousy mood? it's friday

[beegee]

aaah, the bars. yes. the keepers of all that is cliche'.

who cares why i'm in a lousy mood?

write another poem.

[EdgeVox]

"keepers of all that is cliche"....Right.

[beegee]

sarcasm?

i meant it...but you must disagree.

ah, well...back to your poems.

[EdgeVox]

so you don't have aim....do you have yahoo messenger or icq or anything like that

[beegee]

bonosgirl arrives at the crossroads, flicks her cigarette into the dirt, looks the devil straight in the eye and says this...edgevox has AOL.

[Achtung_Bebe]

Originally posted by EdgeVox BEBE!!! no I never got your email.......where have you been I called and left a completely bogus name like Engelbert or something......your sister was not amused....

haha strange I never got the message from Engelbert... Well I've been here and there, but obviously you were here when I was there & vice versa.. anyway I can't see why you wouldn't have received my email, is it still the same? and I haven't called b/c I thought the number had changed... I would check on this myself in the profile but that feature is disabled on my end it seems.

well i'm moving as of today (gradually settling in) so my # and stuff will change so let me know here or try sending a message to rockstartled@rock.com

if you can fit it in between writing such brilliance that is

[EdgeVox]

hey bebe what's your number

[Achtung_Bebe]

hey that was quick... well I don't have a new number yet. Besides I'm online so I can't get calls anyway... what's yours?? Don't dodge the question either.

[EdgeVox]

dodge the question? foolish fap......same number as I had in austin